looking good but still some issues.
The mag check to see if it has any rounds in it looks really odd, it looks like the player is just bring his arm up in a really odd way and not really looking at the mag cos its constanly moving, watch the QBZ with UGL reload animation, take note of the mag check in that. thats the reload of the rifle, not the UGL btw but it needs to be the QBZ version
I would suggest is you bring the mag closer to the cam, point the top in the view of the cam, pause it for 1/2 a sec and put it in the rifle.
the other bit is that with the rifle being strait vertical and forward looks really odd when putting the mag in tbh... tilt it to the right a little and bring the rifle up a little I would say. If you watch the video you notice both, mostly a tilt to the right but also a little tilt upwards, but very slightly. There is about a 30degs tilit to the right so do that
the rest is really good, apart from I would say maybe more of a obvious forward push on the forward assist may be good
