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[Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 05:46
by -kodiak-
Hey all, i created this character for school. Here's the final product :)
C&C are always welcome :) :)

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Re: First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 06:41
by Joeziah
that's awesome, I'm having trouble making a flipping house, well, texture it at least.

Re: First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 06:43
by boilerrat
I like the jaw bones and the arches leading from nose - under lip.

Great job, personally im not a fan of sup4h l4z4h eyes but its your character :P

Re: First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 07:14
by -kodiak-
so i'll give ya bit of a back story for this guy. He was in the special forces and after a mission his family was killed in retaliation for a job he did a few years back. So he went rogue and started taking down big corporations with his military experience. (punisher style back story) he painted a target on his chest kinda to say..."COME GET ME" anyway his face was damaged but thanks to technology he had that eye piece mounted on his face. It's an eye, binoc, camera, and NVG in one. :) :) :)

Re: First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 07:16
by Rudd
quick reskin to make him a borg :D looks great though

Re: First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 09:07
by master of the templars
did you make the SCAR?

Re: First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 10:09
by BroCop
Looks great though somehow that facial texture awfully reminds me of my favorite assassin, Mr. 47

Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 15:48
by -kodiak-
yeah i modeled everything.
Everyone says his face looks like someone, i've even heard captain pickard... or my professor

Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 16:10
by Z-trooper
Looks very cool Kodiak.

One thing I am missing when I look at his face is some depth. I think if you bake an AO of the low poly that would do wonders, especially with making the optics look more attached to his head.

Just a suggestion though :)

man how I wish I could just spend my studying time on stuff like this, I envy you :D

Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 16:18
by -kodiak-
lol thanks man, yeah it's not really homework, it's fun. so i can keep at it for hours and hours lol. Can someone critique this female sculpt i'm working on.... besides the head i know is too big... what else is wrong, i don't know how to make her sexier... something is off...

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Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 16:19
by Scot
Her arms look too long for her body IMO, nice work though :)

Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 16:43
by -kodiak-
i thought that too, but i used real reference for it... actually my room mate posed for me ;) so maybe i should beef her arms up??? i dunno, i'll try it and see if it fixes it

Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-16 19:14
by Adriaan
The head looks a bit too big i think, not sure though :p

Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-17 00:23
by bazza_1964
Make her hips just a little wider....thus, changing the thigh angle...

Re: [Model] First character

Posted: 2009-12-17 00:38
by -kodiak-
i think i'm gonna do a major overhaul of her. Change the proportions a lot and see what i get... i'm gonna detach her head and add a shirt then just place her head back and back a low poly... geez, i wish i could just pass the learning stage and go to the pro stage right away lol. Does anyone have any really nice images of rogue from xmen? She's got a sexy frame