[Model] First character

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-kodiak-
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[Model] First character

Post by -kodiak- »

Hey all, i created this character for school. Here's the final product :)
C&C are always welcome :) :)

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Joeziah
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Post by Joeziah »

that's awesome, I'm having trouble making a flipping house, well, texture it at least.
boilerrat
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Post by boilerrat »

I like the jaw bones and the arches leading from nose - under lip.

Great job, personally im not a fan of sup4h l4z4h eyes but its your character :P
-kodiak-
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Post by -kodiak- »

so i'll give ya bit of a back story for this guy. He was in the special forces and after a mission his family was killed in retaliation for a job he did a few years back. So he went rogue and started taking down big corporations with his military experience. (punisher style back story) he painted a target on his chest kinda to say..."COME GET ME" anyway his face was damaged but thanks to technology he had that eye piece mounted on his face. It's an eye, binoc, camera, and NVG in one. :) :) :)
Rudd
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Post by Rudd »

quick reskin to make him a borg :D looks great though
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master of the templars
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Post by master of the templars »

did you make the SCAR?
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BroCop
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Post by BroCop »

Looks great though somehow that facial texture awfully reminds me of my favorite assassin, Mr. 47
-kodiak-
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Post by -kodiak- »

yeah i modeled everything.
Everyone says his face looks like someone, i've even heard captain pickard... or my professor
Z-trooper
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Post by Z-trooper »

Looks very cool Kodiak.

One thing I am missing when I look at his face is some depth. I think if you bake an AO of the low poly that would do wonders, especially with making the optics look more attached to his head.

Just a suggestion though :)

man how I wish I could just spend my studying time on stuff like this, I envy you :D
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-kodiak-
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Post by -kodiak- »

lol thanks man, yeah it's not really homework, it's fun. so i can keep at it for hours and hours lol. Can someone critique this female sculpt i'm working on.... besides the head i know is too big... what else is wrong, i don't know how to make her sexier... something is off...

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Scot
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Post by Scot »

Her arms look too long for her body IMO, nice work though :)
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-kodiak-
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Post by -kodiak- »

i thought that too, but i used real reference for it... actually my room mate posed for me ;) so maybe i should beef her arms up??? i dunno, i'll try it and see if it fixes it
Adriaan
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Post by Adriaan »

The head looks a bit too big i think, not sure though :p
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bazza_1964
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Post by bazza_1964 »

Make her hips just a little wider....thus, changing the thigh angle...
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-kodiak-
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Post by -kodiak- »

i think i'm gonna do a major overhaul of her. Change the proportions a lot and see what i get... i'm gonna detach her head and add a shirt then just place her head back and back a low poly... geez, i wish i could just pass the learning stage and go to the pro stage right away lol. Does anyone have any really nice images of rogue from xmen? She's got a sexy frame
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