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Raniak
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Post by Raniak »

I love 'sirenz of War', it remind me of the TV show Jericho... what does the morse says ?

"Death From Above" is nice too but a little too slow... or empty ? Except for the beginning with the radio and stuff, it need more of it, I know there is more at around 1:30 but you should move it more to the beginning.

Would love to heard them ingame while loading ;)
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DrBlaps wrote:I agree that the pace has to be right (although pace is more to do with the beats and structure than the tempo - shorten and intro here, stick in a break there and I reckon Neoteknix' tracks could rival anyones), but I always thought the whole sound fx and voiceovers thing is a bit cheesy. One particular fx or voiceover, processed properly and used as a subtle motif can work well, but it's only a short step from there to lame it's the late 80's and I just bought my first sampler territory!
haha i agree with the Sampling, i wouldnt just stick " ROGER THAT " MEDIC ! MEDIIIIIIIIIC " and so on on top, i'd make a story out of them and add real sound effects and the like.

i Will put your Critisism into affect and get the Tracks Shortened with quicker and fuller Breaks into the beats, Did quite alot of work to the Sirenz of war last night - Its Sounding Heft now i've added some breakbeatz ! :D

Thankyou for your comments ;)
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Post by =UKHC=Neoteknix »

Raniak wrote:I love 'sirenz of War', it remind me of the TV show Jericho... what does the morse says ?

"Death From Above" is nice too but a little too slow... or empty ? Except for the beginning with the radio and stuff, it need more of it, I know there is more at around 1:30 but you should move it more to the beginning.

Would love to heard them ingame while loading ;)
Thankyou Raniak, i agree with you in the fact is does sound empty slightly, i'll shift back the into to make it one big progressive build up - so that it has a bit more oomph when it kicks too :)

and thanks Thats really cool of you to say you'd love to hear it in Pr ! :D :D :D

oh yeah, and the morse says " beep beeep beep, beepbeepbeeepbeeeep *

which translates to " i havent got a ****in clue ... lol "
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Post by KP »

I loved "Death from Above".

As people have said, they're a bit too slow for loading music, but still great tracks.
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KP wrote:I loved "Death from Above".

As people have said, they're a bit too slow for loading music, but still great tracks.
Thanks Kp ! i'm glad you liked them, i will post the updated versions on here later on tonight as i've took everyones advice, and tried my best to give them some pace !

Watch this Space !

Nick :D
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Post by =UKHC=Neoteknix »

Ok you guys, i've just updated "Sirenz of War" on soundclick, if you go back to the first Post and Click on the Link it'll be there waiting for you all to have a listen !

Please give constructive feedback, if your harsh i dont mind ! or do you think its an improvement on the original ?

Please let me know what you think !!


PS - Thanks to all that have listened over the past few days, you managed to get Sirenz of War up to 15 in the trance Charts ! LOL 8)

nick :D
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is there a forum for " Smacktarded, Weapon Stealing rather than saving you Medics " ??

I cant belive what twats play this game sometimes.
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Post by BlakeJr »

Bah...
Sirenz of war is perfect right up to the halfway point where the techno really begins...
Matter of taste, I know, but I like half of it and that can't be bad? Can it? :lol:
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Post by =UKHC=Neoteknix »

BlakeJr wrote:Bah...
Sirenz of war is perfect right up to the halfway point where the techno really begins...
Matter of taste, I know, but I like half of it and that can't be bad? Can it? :lol:
techno techno techno technoooooooooo no no ! no no ... is it really techno ? i didnt realise ! theres the "Tek" in the neoteknix shining through :D
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Post by Maverick--113 »

I'm thinking Fortunate Son would be sooooo much cooler.
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Post by eggman »

nice stuff :)
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Maverick--113 wrote:I'm thinking Fortunate Son would be sooooo much cooler.
Fortunate Son ? *confused*
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'[R-DEV wrote:eggman']nice stuff :)
nice one thanks for takin a listen Eggman 8) * salutes*
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Post by =UKHC=Neoteknix »

anymore feedback from the pr Crew ? ;-)

come on over 400 listens in the past few days, but not a lot of opinions !

Thankyou all so far who have listened, Sirenz of war has reached the number 11 Spot in the trance Charts - out of 24.000 :| :| :|

thats awesome thanks to everyone who's gave up thier 2 mins each to listen !

Nick :D :D :D
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Post by bosco_ »

The tracks sure are nice, but I dont know if they fit into PR.
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Post by SpartanofShadows »

Sirenz of war FTW
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Post by =UKHC=Neoteknix »

'[R-PUB wrote:bosco']The tracks sure are nice, but I dont know if they fit into PR.
thanks for taking a listen Bosco, very much appreciated !

can i ask why you feel they are not suited ? is it maybe that they are too electronic ? too fast ? I'm looking for constructive ideas to create the ones you guys want to hear if your up for helping !

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Post by =UKHC=Neoteknix »

SpartanofShadows wrote:Sirenz of war FTW
Thanks Spartan ! :D

i've been playing it back at 4 times slower, even though its slow it has a much more stmospheric feeling to it - you should try slowing it down with an audio editing program if you have one :)
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Post by =UKHC=Neoteknix »

One last bump for anyone whos not heard these yet !

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