for some reason I dont like the "huge new maps" part. I mean visually its good but it kind of sounds like "omg we has teh huge new maps !!!1!!one!!" Maybe replace it with "17sqm maps" - Sounds more professional.
yea i did think it sounded a bit corny but tbh i didnt really know what to put there at the time ops:
also i think the maps are measured in kilometers not miles?