Help with feedback on vid i made.

[ralfidude]

I created this video in two days. Let me know what u think, i know i missed rough editing on a clip or two, my bad. Once im done with finals il work on making a better one. So, let me know if there is too much of a thing going on or what not, i like to improve my movie making skills.

Dont forget to click whatch in high quality at the bottom right corner of the video.

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[PlaynCool]

Good video, i liked it.

[ralfidude]

Thanx, i just saw ur comment on it.

[ostupidman]

I applaud your willingness to create something and to share it with the general public. I liked the song choices for the vid, however it did seem very disjointed. There was no real theme or sense of continuity that flowed through it. Each scene didn't really feel linked to anything else, which is fine if that is what you were going for but it doesn't keep an audiences attention very well. All in all a good start though.

[Scot]

Nice vid

[dbzao]

I think it was very nice cinematic compilation. Don't know why you used some crazy video effect in the middle there, but some nice scenes. There was a few clipping ones you could have avoided, but nice.

I think I was playing some of those rounds you recorded, specially the Fools Road one. The two guys coming up the ladder and getting killed by the guy in the conveyor belt were in my squad. I later went up and killed the guy. The officer might be me, but I don't remember killing that guy coming up.

[McBumLuv]

Nice cinematics, but you should really try adding a storyline. It would make it that much better if the sequence of events all related as a whole

Nice editing as well, though, so good job.

[Japub]

A lot of the scenes are really nice, like those in the beginning. The truck in the djungle looks really cool. And the first scene of Op. Archer.

[akatabrask]

Very nice video, liked the tank/apc battle fly through thing and ambush clips alot and there were many good clips, though you could skip some of the weird stuff that's diplays more of a bug or so, like the brit falling down the roof on hilltop and such, or that random clip from kashan from the a-10 felt a little of. And i don't know if you should have all that slowmo allthough it came very nice to the slow music

[Anderson29]

i liked the video man....very well done. i also respect the critisim from the above posts. is there a way u could add the bullet and firefights sounds in the background of the music...i think that would be sweet. and also if it was a high res video but could of just been my setting on low res at youtube. anyways man, keep up the good work.

[ralfidude]

Allright thankx for all the feedback.

I had only 3 battlerecorded games available with limited space on my disc so i had little material to work with, plus it took 2 days, lol. But all and all i found myself trying to fit in the missing pieves with random clips, so i think im gonna cut that **** out next time, lol. I

Also i know the music transition isnt the best. I played on other battlerecorded games that never showed up for download so i wanted to use 3 diff maps for the second half, but that never happened, dissapointment server side, lol.

Allright guys ,thanx for the input though, greatly appreciated!

[ralfidude]

dbzao, lol, i was the dude that killed those two guys, then u came up the ladder, but at the moment i swithced to c4, was gonna plant it there for a surprise, but as soon as u came into view of the ladder, i switched back to my m4, but before i could get a shot off, u shot my ***. Its weird cuz u came out of the corner kneeling but walking to the side, and the first 3 bullets hit me exactly dead on. Needless to say, i was pissed, lol.