First suggestion slow down the screen switching i was feeling quesy by the end of the movie. Over than that nice movie look forward to seeing complete one.
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I think you need to give the viewer more time to actually be able to see the shot. Newcomers won't be able to see a thing imo... the screens switch wayy too fast...and the fading they have is good, but doesn't give time to appreciate the content you're trying to show.
you have over used the fade in and out way to much and to fast. the viewer cant see the image or get what is happening. you need to keep it on that part for longer. If you are going to use the fade in and out bit very quickly do not over use it. Looks exstrmly tacky.