MEC Storyline Intro and Part 1

[USMCMIDN]

So I need to write a story for my writing class I decided to make one up on PR MEC forces...

yes thats how original I am. I hope you guys like it. There is more to come but this is the beginning.

the story is in an attachment...

its only a rough draft also.

Once again it is only for a class....

[Truism]

It's for creative writing, right? Whoever reads this won't have an interest in strategic affairs? If they do, there are some fairly improbable things, given that this only takes place in two years.

Also, watch it if they have particularly left wing sympathies - talk of enemies of the free world forming secret alliances is absolutely impossible for some of them to comprehend ever.

(I actually had a university tutor who would not admit that Germany or Hitler were at any fault for WWII. Talk of them planning the war was nothing but right wing moral justification for an economic war to crush the middle and lower classes. The Allies provoked the war with disgusting, unprovoked and unjustifiable action over Poland. Maybe your teacher won't be a raving idiot, but it might be wise to err on the side of caution.)

[USMCMIDN]

It's for creative writing, right? Whoever reads this won't have an interest in strategic affairs? If they do, there are some fairly improbable things, given that this only takes place in two years.

Also, watch it if they have particularly left wing sympathies - talk of enemies of the free world forming secret alliances is absolutely impossible for some of them to comprehend ever.

(I actually had a university tutor who would not admit that Germany or Hitler were at any fault for WWII. Talk of them planning the war was nothing but right wing moral justification for an economic war to crush the middle and lower classes. The Allies provoked the war with disgusting, unprovoked and unjustifiable action over Poland. Maybe your teacher won't be a raving idiot, but it might be wise to err on the side of caution.)

I agree with the whole no one wants to read about strategic affairs but there will be those who will be like well how did this take place... and i am trying to kinda have it somewhat realistic...yeah it most likely will not happen because in the long run NATO would dominate and it is suicide but it could and the left wing symps i am not trying to offend anyone but thinking that no one hates the western world and no1 is willing to form an alliance to combat them is somewhat arrogant but yes I do agree with you there will be those ppl who will think that this is totally far fetched lol but...later in the story i am going to basically suggest US, UK etc... have the air and sea.. they have won some battles on the ground and thats where I will lead up to the kashan desert map, than the USMC is moving in by sea for example muttrah city and asad khal... I am planning on the USMC invaded a city earlier and cleared a way for the US Army o land a tank company things like that... the story will end b4 the battles in PR

and the whole 2 yrs thing i was trying to emphasize that Iran has planned this since 2003-04 when the US invaded Iraq... maybe its not that clear but i will rewrite it thank you for pointing it out!!!

Thanks a lot for the feed back.

[Shaihuluid]

(I actually had a university tutor who would not admit that Germany or Hitler were at any fault for WWII. Talk of them planning the war was nothing but right wing moral justification for an economic war to crush the middle and lower classes. The Allies provoked the war with disgusting, unprovoked and unjustifiable action over Poland. Maybe your teacher won't be a raving idiot, but it might be wise to err on the side of caution.)

woah, bad tutor. What was he, a neo-nazi? It's fashionable to have revisionist historical views, but seriously!

Oh, and great story BTW USMCMIDN. I'll be looking forward to seeing the rest of it

[devildog279]

It's for creative writing, right? Whoever reads this won't have an interest in strategic affairs? If they do, there are some fairly improbable things, given that this only takes place in two years.

Also, watch it if they have particularly left wing sympathies - talk of enemies of the free world forming secret alliances is absolutely impossible for some of them to comprehend ever.

I dunno about other people with "left wing sympathies" but the idea of countries like Iran and Syria forming alliances to further destruction of the United States is not impossible for me to comprehend. I think it is a very real possibility, but I think the thing that pisses most conservatives off about liberals is that they tend to have less of a O shit were gonna die send in the army sort of attitude. That could be seen as weakness, or it could be seen as patience.

But if your teacher is any good it shouldnt matter whether they are liberal or conservative. All that should matter is that it is creative and interesting, and I think your story has the makings of both those things.

[Shaihuluid]

I dunno about other people with "left wing sympathies" but the idea of countries like Iran and Syria forming alliances to further destruction of the United States is not impossible for me to comprehend. I think it is a very real possibility, but I think the thing that pisses most conservatives off about liberals is that they tend to have less of a O shit were gonna die send in the army sort of attitude. That could be seen as weakness, or it could be seen as patience.

But if your teacher is any good it shouldnt matter whether they are liberal or conservative. All that should matter is that it is creative and interesting, and I think your story has the makings of both those things.

meh. this thread has an unfortunate tendency to deviate into politics. The MEC does not exist, end of story.

[Truism]

woah, bad tutor. What was he, a neo-nazi? It's fashionable to have revisionist historical views, but seriously!

She was a card carrying Communist who would believe anything at all if it could be framed as rich people trying to exploit poor people.

[Shaihuluid]

She was a card carrying Communist who would believe anything at all if it could be framed as rich people trying to exploit poor people.

so while the SA was breaking open communist heads in the street brawls, they were actually trying to free the working class? . Your tutor helps further the cause of the Proletariat by exploiting her pupils for capital!

[Ts4EVER]

(I actually had a university tutor who would not admit that Germany or Hitler were at any fault for WWII. Talk of them planning the war was nothing but right wing moral justification for an economic war to crush the middle and lower classes. The Allies provoked the war with disgusting, unprovoked and unjustifiable action over Poland. Maybe your teacher won't be a raving idiot, but it might be wise to err on the side of caution.)

Yeah those poor Nazis... just minding their own business and suddenly they get bombed. a shame, really.