i like the outdoor echos in the first version very much!
at this short distance the walls are, you will have the effect i told above very very early.
let us suppose the walls are 3m to left and 3 to right from the listener.
the speed of sound is at around 343m/s.
so, the first early reflection will hit the listener after around 0.0175s.
that means that after these 0.0175 seconds every sound is full of reverb reflections.
if the listener is where the sound source is.
your mic was at around 15 m away. depending where it was and how the surrounding looks like, it is possible that some early reflections hit your mic before the actual sound does. depending on your mic it is also possible that these early reflections wasnt recorded after all, but what i try to tell, the sound will be an other, if you can record it without these walls.
if you have a chance to do so, try to come as near as possible to the shooters position while recording for the most accurate sound like the shooter will hear.
you will need a mic with a real high SPL (sound pressure level), or your mic will oversteer and generate some distortion. maybe a good dynamic one, you would use to capture a snare of a drumset, would do the job. to have a limiter is also not that bad idea..


